ChrisDonovan April 17, 2016 - 9:51am | Modified from the UN Universal Declaration of Human Rights UNIVERSAL CHARTER OF SENTIENT RIGHTS
Whereas recognition of the inherent dignity and of the equal and inalienable rights of all sentient beings is the foundation of freedom, justice and peace in the Frontier Sector, Whereas disregard and contempt for sentient rights have resulted in barbarous acts which have outraged the conscience of all right-minded sentients, and the advent of a universe in which sentient beings shall enjoy freedom of speech and belief and freedom from fear and want has been proclaimed as the highest aspiration, Whereas it is essential, if sentient beings are not to be compelled to have recourse, as a last resort, to rebellion against tyranny and oppression, that sentient rights should be protected by the rule of law, Whereas it is essential to promote the development of friendly relations between planets, Whereas the peoples of the United Planetary Federation have in the Charter reaffirmed their faith in fundamental sentient rights, in the dignity and worth of the all sentients regardless of kind and have determined to promote social progress and better standards of life in larger freedom, Whereas Member Planets have pledged themselves to achieve, in cooperation with the United Planetary Federation, the promotion of universal respect for and observance of sentient rights and fundamental freedoms, Whereas a common understanding of these rights and freedoms is of the greatest importance for the full realization of this pledge, Now, therefore, The Council of Worlds, Proclaims this Universal Charter of Sentient Rights as a common standard of achievement for all peoples and all planets, to the end that every individual and every organ of society, keeping this Charter constantly in mind, shall strive by teaching and education to promote respect for these rights and freedoms and by progressive measures, planetary and interplanetary, to secure their universal and effective recognition and observance, both among the peoples of Member Planets themselves and among the peoples of territories under their jurisdiction. Article 1.All sentient beings are born free and equal in dignity and rights. They are endowed with reason and conscience and should act towards one another in a spirit of brotherhood. Article 2.Everyone is entitled to all the rights and freedoms set forth in this Declaration, without distinction of any kind, such as species, race, colour, sex, language, religion, political or other opinion, planetary or social origin, property, birth or other status. Furthermore, no distinction shall be made on the basis of the political, jurisdictional or interplanetary status of the planet, country or territory to which a being belongs, whether it be independent, trust, non-self-governing or under any other limitation of sovereignty. Article 3.Everyone has the right to life, liberty and security of self. Article 4.No one shall be held in slavery or servitude; slavery and the slave trade shall be prohibited in all their forms. Article 5.No one shall be subjected to torture or to cruel, inhuman or degrading treatment or punishment. Article 6.Everyone has the right to recognition everywhere as a person before the law. Article 7.All are equal before the law and are entitled without any discrimination to equal protection of the law. All are entitled to equal protection against any discrimination in violation of this Declaration and against any incitement to such discrimination. Article 8.Everyone has the right to an effective remedy by the competent national, planetary, or interplanetary tribunals for acts violating the fundamental rights granted him by the constitution or by law. Article 9.No one shall be subjected to arbitrary arrest, detention or exile. Article 10.Everyone is entitled in full equality to a fair and public hearing by an independent and impartial tribunal, in the determination of his rights and obligations and of any criminal charge against him. Article 11.
Article 12.No one shall be subjected to arbitrary interference with his privacy, family, home or correspondence, nor to attacks upon his honour and reputation. Everyone has the right to the protection of the law against such interference or attacks. Article 13.
Article 14.
Article 15.
Article 16.
Article 17.
Article 18.Everyone has the right to freedom of thought, conscience and religion; this right includes freedom to change his religion or belief, and freedom, either alone or in community with others and in public or private, to manifest his religion or belief in teaching, practice, worship and observance. Article 19.Everyone has the right to freedom of opinion and expression; this right includes freedom to hold opinions without interference and to seek, receive and impart information and ideas through any media and regardless of borders. Article 20.
Article 21.
Article 22.Everyone, as a member of society, has the right to social security and is entitled to realization, through national and planetary effort and interplanetary co-operation and in accordance with the organization and resources of each Planet, of the economic, social and cultural rights indispensable for his dignity and the free development of his personality. Article 23.
Article 24.Everyone has the right to rest and leisure, including reasonable limitation of working hours and periodic holidays with pay. Article 25.
Article 26.
Article 27.
Article 28.Everyone is entitled to a social and interplanetary order in which the rights and freedoms set forth in this Declaration can be fully realized. Article 29.
Article 30.Nothing in this Declaration may be interpreted as implying for any Planet, group or person any right to engage in any activity or to perform any act aimed at the destruction of any of the rights and freedoms set forth herein.
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iggy April 17, 2016 - 10:26pm | Mr. Chris Donovan, I, as a practicing member of the Fromeltar Groth Terledrom Debate Society and honorable Dralasite of standing wish to open a full and complete discussion of your charter presented here. I call all interested debaters to the circle to speak and be spoken to. Gather around esteemed beings. I have the following grievances about this charter: Many statements are made from a human centric vocabulary. Also there are many gender specific pronouns that do not correspond properly with dralasite gender usage. Bellow are my comments and suggestions from an initial quick read as a dralasite. Please take special note to article 16. Article 1. The use of the word born is biased towards species that are gestated internal to their parent. This does not pay proper respect to Dralasite budding or Vrusk egg laying. Additionally the Osakar reproduction process does not use the word born as written here. Articles 2 and 3. Change the first word everyone to everybeing. Article 4. No one should be reworded as no being. Article 5. No one should be reworded as no being. The word inhuman is insensitive to non-humans. The word should be replaced. Article 6. Change the first word everyone to everybeing. The word person should be substituted with sentient being. Article 8. Change the first word everyone to everybeing. Change him to them. Article 9. Change one to being. Article 10. Change the first word everyone to everybeing. Change his to their and him to them. Article 11. Change the first word everyone to everybeing. Change he to they and his to their. Change no one to no being. Article 12. Change no one to no being, his to their, and everyone to everybeing. Article 13. Change everyone to everybeing in 1 and 2. Change his to their. Article 14. Change the first word everyone to everybeing. Article 15. Change the first word everyone to everybeing. Change no one to no being and his to their. Article 16. This article is human centric. Dralasites do not marry. Vrusk partner with their companies to raise larvae so the use of family as described here is too specific. Yazirians include their entire clans in the family structure. This article needs a full discussion and debate. Article 17. Change the first word everyone to everybeing. Change no one to no being and his to their. Article 18. Change the first word everyone to everybeing. Change his to their. Article 19. Change the first word everyone to everybeing. Article 20. Change the first word everyone to everybeing. Change no one to no being. Article 21. Change the first word everyone to everybeing and his to their in 1 and 2. 3. Change people to populace or more acurately sentient beings. This also needs debate among the whole because there are governments in the UPF that are not democratic. Vrusk corporate governance is an example. Article 22. Change the first word everyone to everybeing and his to their. Article 23. Change the first word everyone to everybeing in 1 - 4. Change himself to themselves and his to their in 3. Change his to their in 4. This article also references and assumes common human family structure. See my statement in article 16. Article 24. Change the first word everyone to everybeing. Note that many Vrusk will have issues with the broadness of this article. Article 25. Change the first word everyone to everybeing. Change himself to themselves and his to their. The reference to family needs to be broadened to include non-human points of view. See my statement in article 16. Item 2 supposes a human view of offspring and parental relationships. This item needs discussion and broader expression. Article 26. Change the first word everyone to everybeing. Education is presented here from a human centric view. Mention needs to be made to Dralasite stoas, Yazirian clan practices, and Vrusk larval education systems. Additionally the Rim races have their customs and systems that need to be addressed. Item 3 does not include the clan for Yazirians and the corporation for Vrusk. Nor does it address the Dralasite nature of budding and the freedom of new buds to seek their own path beyond the beliefs of their parent. Article 27. Change the first word everyone to everybeing in 1 and 2. Change he is to they are. Article 28. Change the first word everyone to everybeing. Article 29. Change the first word everyone to everybeing and his to its in 1. Change his to their and everyone to everybeing in 2. -iggy |
ChrisDonovan April 18, 2016 - 5:45am | To the esteemed Dralasite Iggy, greetings and be welcome in the circle. I fear this may be a short debate as I find many of your objections easily met by minor alterations to the document in question. I stipulate for the record that the model document was written with the lay observer in mind and utilized colloquial linguistic forms and shortcuts to which I attempted to append modifying language where I felt it necessary. Perhaps the result was too much of one and too little of another. Accomodation can be made to either position, but I agree in principle that we should strive for clarity. My only concern is that the more specific the language, the greater the invitation and temptation of legal and para-legal wordsmithing. I feel broad concepts serve us better than hyper-specific detail in this case. I would give no opening to our "honorable" associates in the LRA. |
ChrisDonovan April 18, 2016 - 7:19am | I have updated the proposed document in accordancy with your concerns and believe I have addressed the majority of your points. I will make a few comments after the text of the modified document. BEGINS
Whereas recognition of the inherent dignity and of the equal and inalienable rights of all sentient beings is the foundation of freedom, justice and peace in the Frontier Sector, Whereas disregard and contempt for sentient rights have resulted in barbarous acts which have outraged the conscience of all right-minded sentients, and the advent of a universe in which sentient beings shall enjoy freedom of speech and belief and freedom from fear and want has been proclaimed as the highest aspiration, Whereas it is essential, if sentient beings are not to be compelled to have recourse, as a last resort, to rebellion against tyranny and oppression, that sentient rights should be protected by the rule of law, Whereas it is essential to promote the development of friendly relations between planets, Whereas the peoples of the United Planetary Federation have in the Charter reaffirmed their faith in fundamental sentient rights, in the dignity and worth of the all sentients regardless of kind and have determined to promote social progress and better standards of life in larger freedom, Whereas Member Planets have pledged themselves to achieve, in cooperation with the United Planetary Federation, the promotion of universal respect for and observance of sentient rights and fundamental freedoms, Whereas a common understanding of these rights and freedoms is of the greatest importance for the full realization of this pledge, Now, therefore, The Council of Worlds, Proclaims this Universal Charter of Sentient Rights as a common standard of achievement for all peoples and all planets, to the end that every individual and every organ of society, keeping this Charter constantly in mind, shall strive by teaching and education to promote respect for these rights and freedoms and by progressive measures, planetary and interplanetary, to secure their universal and effective recognition and observance, both among the peoples of Member Planets themselves and among the peoples of territories under their jurisdiction. Article 1.All sentient beings are inherently free and equal in dignity and rights. They are endowed with reason and conscience and should act towards one another in a spirit of brotherhood. Article 2.Every sentient is entitled to all the rights and freedoms set forth in this Charter, without distinction of any kind, such as species, race, colour, sex, language, religion, political or other opinion, planetary or social origin, property, birth or other status. Furthermore, no distinction shall be made on the basis of the political, jurisdictional or interplanetary status of the planet, country or territory to which a being belongs, whether it be independent, trust, non-self-governing or under any other limitation of sovereignty. Article 3.Every sentient has the right to life, liberty and security of self. Article 4.No sentient shall be held in slavery or servitude; slavery and the slave trade shall be prohibited in all their forms. Article 5.No sentient shall be subjected to torture or to cruel or degrading treatment or punishment. Article 6.Every sentient has the right to recognition everywhere as a being before the law. Article 7.All are equal before the law and are entitled without any discrimination to equal protection of the law. All are entitled to equal protection against any discrimination in violation of this Charter and against any incitement to such discrimination. Article 8.Every sentient has the right to an effective remedy by the competent national, planetary, or interplanetary tribunals for acts violating the fundamental rights granted them by the constitution or by law. Article 9.No sentient shall be subjected to arbitrary arrest, detention or exile. Article 10.Every sentient is entitled in full equality to a fair and public hearing by an independent and impartial tribunal, in the determination of their rights and obligations and of any criminal charge against them. Article 11.
Article 12.No sentient shall be subjected to arbitrary interference with their privacy, family, home or correspondence, nor to attacks upon their honour and reputation. Every sentient has the right to the protection of the law against such interference or attacks. Article 13.
Article 14.
Article 15.
Article 16.
Article 17.
Article 18.Every sentient has the right to freedom of thought, conscience and religion; this right includes freedom to change their religion or belief, and freedom, either alone or in community with others and in public or private, to manifest their religion or belief in teaching, practice, worship and observance. Article 19.Every sentient has the right to freedom of opinion and expression; this right includes freedom to hold opinions without interference and to seek, receive and impart information and ideas through any media and regardless of borders. Article 20.
Article 21.
Article 22.Every sentient, as a member of society, has the right to social security and is entitled to realization, through national and planetary effort and interplanetary co-operation and in accordance with the organization and resources of each Planet, of the economic, social and cultural rights indispensable for their dignity and the free development of their personality. Article 23.
Article 24.Every sentient has the right to rest and leisure, including reasonable limitation of working hours and periodic holidays with pay. Article 25.
Article 26.
Article 27.
Article 28.Every sentient is entitled to a social and interplanetary order in which the rights and freedoms set forth in this Charter can be fully realized. Article 29.
Article 30.Nothing in this Charter may be interpreted as implying for any Planet, group or sentient any right to engage in any activity or to perform any act aimed at the destruction of any of the rights and freedoms set forth herein.
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jedion357 May 11, 2016 - 2:01pm | Ok the opening paragraph before the articles that says the COW proclaims ... And later says "keeping this charter constantly in mind .... Striving for education" The wording here basically is non binding and any world can blow this document off if it likes. I actually like that. As it puts it's in the same category as the Declaration of Independence something read and discussed in schools, some times it's quoted but it is not really the law of the land. This makes sense if you consider the difficulty of the COW to pass binding legislation. Good job. Let's publish it. I might not be a dralasite, vrusk or yazirian but I do play one in Star Frontiers! |
jedion357 May 11, 2016 - 2:06pm | PS the guy at colonial chrome wrote an essay on sapience vs sentience. I think he has a point so I prefer sapience myself.
http://colonialchrome.co.uk/Pages/Rants/Rant_Sentience.html I might not be a dralasite, vrusk or yazirian but I do play one in Star Frontiers! |
Tchklinxa May 15, 2016 - 5:29pm | Interesting I never realized sapient was the correct term. "Never fire a laser at a mirror." |
Tchklinxa May 15, 2016 - 5:31pm | "Humanitarian" is human centric so I guess the multi-space race term would by "Sapiencarian" "Never fire a laser at a mirror." |
jedion357 May 18, 2016 - 2:22pm | Specitarian? Sapientarian? I might not be a dralasite, vrusk or yazirian but I do play one in Star Frontiers! |