Giving the Jakar more depth

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bossmoss
October 15, 2012 - 2:13pm
The alien species called Jakar are listed in this project, under downloads.  I remember reading about them on their original website years ago.

I think they have some potential, but as is they seem a bit cartoonish.  What can we do to "rehabilitate" them into a more complex alien species?
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jedion357
March 4, 2014 - 5:52am
Though they are slow because of the -10 to RS/DEX they should not by any means be slow in movement.

Perhaps not as fast as the vrusk but could have a short sprint speed that is impressive.

A "bull rush" into combat maybe? Perhaps racial ability?
I might not be a dralasite, vrusk or yazirian but I do play one in Star Frontiers!

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bossmoss
March 9, 2014 - 12:03am
I agree.  I couldn't see them being fast anyway, but I like the sudden sprint.  I can see them charging into combat.

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bossmoss
March 9, 2014 - 12:11am
So unless you have anything else you'd like to add, are we ready to declare a final version?  If so, should we replace the copy here in the Alien Workshop under downloads, or simply add a 2nd one beside it? (maybe call it Jakar 2.0)  Also, should we submit it to the Star Frontiersman, or put it in the Frontier Explorer?

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jedion357
March 9, 2014 - 5:55am
bossmoss wrote:
So unless you have anything else you'd like to add, are we ready to declare a final version?  If so, should we replace the copy here in the Alien Workshop under downloads, or simply add a 2nd one beside it? (maybe call it Jakar 2.0)  Also, should we submit it to the Star Frontiersman, or put it in the Frontier Explorer?


Use a document page in the documents section, which can be edited after feed back and review.
I might not be a dralasite, vrusk or yazirian but I do play one in Star Frontiers!