Corpco Planetary Brief Feedback Topic

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JCab747
May 9, 2017 - 1:38pm
Here is a section where you can provide feedback and suggestions to improve the planetary brief that I created for Corpco, Streel's corporate world.

Be sure to read the brief in the downloads section.

The planetary map can be found here: http://www.starfrontiers.us/node/9734

The planetary description can be found here: http://www.starfrontiers.us/node/9736
Joe Cabadas
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jedion357
May 16, 2017 - 4:58am
Just a piece of advice: you should include a link in this post so peeps don't have to go looking for it. 

Edit: what I meant is a link to the download so it can be accessed directly
I might not be a dralasite, vrusk or yazirian but I do play one in Star Frontiers!

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jedion357
May 16, 2017 - 9:52am
You should design a Streel exploration / archaeology service/decision. In the encounter written by Zeb Cook set on Laco (IIRC it's in the Ares archive) the single PC is a member of the PGC exploration service. I forget what Cook named it. Point is this planet as described is laden with archaeology sites and it only makes sense that Streel will have a team or division for archaeological exploration. 
I might not be a dralasite, vrusk or yazirian but I do play one in Star Frontiers!

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jedion357
May 16, 2017 - 12:22pm
Streel might, might, build a ship building facility here for just in case they enter another corporate war. It would be ground based and tooled to turn out the HS4 Corvettes that have been Popular with the corporation. 

Doing it here would be a security measure whereas Pale has a lot of thru traffic and no doubt plenty of PGC corporate espionage assets that Streel can do nothing about. 

It would constitute a second space port but one off limits to all but official traffic
I might not be a dralasite, vrusk or yazirian but I do play one in Star Frontiers!

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JCab747
May 16, 2017 - 12:48pm
Neat ideas. I will be posting some NPCs for review -- one being a Yazarian archeologist.

And, when I can, I'll add the links to the documents/downloads in each review forum as you suggested.
Joe Cabadas

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JCab747
May 16, 2017 - 1:31pm
I especially like your idea of Streel creating its own, secret ground-based ship building operations on Corpco... it might be inadvertedly placed in one of the areas that could unleash one of the "scarlett ghosts." Hee, hee.
Joe Cabadas

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JCab747
May 16, 2017 - 4:19pm
jedion357 wrote:
Just a piece of advice: you should include a link in this post so peeps don't have to go looking for it. 

Edit: what I meant is a link to the download so it can be accessed directly


Done!
Joe Cabadas

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jedion357
May 17, 2017 - 8:21am
Earth currently has somewhere in the neighborhood of 20 launch centers that could put chem drive vehicles into orbit. So why not the planets of the Frontier?
I might not be a dralasite, vrusk or yazirian but I do play one in Star Frontiers!