 November 26, 2010 - 4:37pm | I'm in the middle of remastering this adventure. I've also corrected the British English. :-) If anyone has high-res scans of the images and the Imagine cover that would be helpful. jacobsar uploaded a word version and I have a .jpg scans of each page. Refer to: Aramax One Adventure |
December 1, 2010 - 10:04am | Thanks to iggy for the image from SFMAN 03. |
December 1, 2010 - 11:40am | For the record I'm also adding fluff to the text. For example; On the right hand side of the gate, at a height of 1 m, is a cardlock.Beyond the gate is the building, with a carpark in front of it. Several vehicles and two ground cycles are parked there. On the right hand side of the gate, at a height of one meter, is a card-lock access point. Beyond the gate is the building, with a car parked in front of it. Several vehicles and two ground cycles are parked there as well. Issues? |
 December 1, 2010 - 1:15pm | You have at least one translation error. Please reboot your poly-vox carpark != car parked carpark = parking lot (i.e. a park for cars  )Unless the car you mysteriously parked there is actually mentioned later. I haven't read the article but based on the snippet you posted it sounds like a parking lot not another vehicle. Ad Astra Per Ardua! My blog - Expanding Frontier Webmaster - The Star Frontiers Network & this site Founding Editor - The Frontier Explorer Magazine Managing Editor - The Star Frontiersman Magazine |
December 1, 2010 - 6:02pm | Terl, Good catch. I've changed words like boot/trunk and misinterpreted carpark. et all, I wanted to mention that I'm not happy with the layout of that article, it does not flow well. I'm going to be changing it up a bit. Part of me would like to see the original layouts, but that's what scanned PDF's are for. :-) I'll upload a copy here for review. |
