 June 10, 2009 - 10:52pm | Congratulations, Lauren, for finishing the first new Star Frontiers module in a very long time, and the first complete one for this site. Just one thing, you have 2 Delta Sections. View my profile for a list of articles I have written, am writing, will write. "It's yo' mama!" —Wicket W. Warrick, Star Wars Ep. VI: Return of the Jedi "That guy's wise." —Logray, Star Wars Ep.VI: Return of the Jedi Do You Wanna Date My Avatar? - Felicia Day (The Guild) |
 June 11, 2009 - 7:21pm | Excellent work. You have some serious encounters in there. It is hard to imagine any but the highest level characters surviving for long, as you said. You may want to give the party some more opportunites for tactical ambush, snipering, and hard cover strong point development. For example, in the final battle, maybe you could add hastily constructed barricades of parked vehicles to assist in the city defense and allow the Sathar invaders to be channelled. That, and give the party vehicles to run down the Sathar, A-Team style... All kinds of ideas. Some room and encounter description boxes would be a great addition to the module. I am a very big believer in those, as I think they are of immense value to a referee. Dividing the information between the referee and the PCs is an important aspect of reffing. Spacing out the paragraphs a bit would help reading the sections. |
