Submitted By: mrgunn on March 11, 2008
    Status: fully resolved

    Corrections to Sathar Section

    Issue Number:
    183
    Severity:
    Minor
    Description:
    As written
    A Sathar moves by slithering across the ground holding the first meter of its body raised off of the ground. Sathar can also coil like a snake, 1.5 meters of their bodies from the ground.

    With corrections
    Sathar move by slithering accross the ground, holding their heads and the upper half of their body about 1 meter off of the ground.  Sathar my stand up to a height of 1.5 meters by coiling the lower portion of their bodies.

    As written
    ...butwith a slight greenish tint

    With corrections
    ...but with a slight greenish tint


    As written
    Some survivors of Sathar attacks have reported that Sathars are not effected by electrical shocks or doze grenades, but these reports have never been confirmed.

    With corrections
    Some survivors of Sathar attacks have reported that Sathar do not seem to be affected by electrical shocks or doze grenades, however these reports remain unconfirmed.
    Comments:

    mrgunn's picture
    mrgunn
    March 11, 2008 - 9:33am
    		Indicated as "Fully Resolved" yet some text of the document still appears to contain some of the same errors, e.g. incorrect use of effected instead of proper, affected.

    Anonymous's picture
    Corjay (not verified)
    March 11, 2008 - 10:19am
    		Oops. Sorry. I forgot to continue after the first correction. I got caught up in formatting. :P

    mrgunn's picture
    mrgunn
    March 14, 2008 - 4:33pm
    		Whoops found an error:
    As written
    Some survivors of Sathar attacks have reported that Sathars may be affected by electrical shocks or doze grenades, but these reports remain unconfirmed.

    Corrected version:
    Some survivors of Sathar attacks have reported that Sathar do not seem to be affected by electrical shocks or doze grenades, however these reports remain unconfirmed.

    You should just learn to cut and paste what I write, I got me the language skillz dude!  Laughing Tongue out


    Anonymous's picture
    Corjay (not verified)
    March 14, 2008 - 4:51pm
    		The problem with that is that I don't always agree 100%. However, in this instance, I simply misread and wasn't thinking about the content, losing sight of the forest for the trees. :)