 November 9, 2007 - 1:24pm | Refer to: Off to the spaceport. I made a couple of grammar fixes/edits - but I have a question (I marked it in red): What is meant by a People-rider? Also - I added a few more notes for the Referee to help him imagine other ideas and directions the situation can take. 3. We wear sungoggles during the day. Not because the sun affects our
vision, but when you're cool like us the sun shines all the time. |
 November 9, 2007 - 2:04pm | I wanted to use "being-rider", you said "people". It could be a small typoe monorail, moving sidewalk...other? |
 November 10, 2007 - 1:17am | Hope folks don't mind went through and fixed some minor spelling errors, some that may be left I wasn't sure if they were intentional or not.  For one of those moving sidewalks I'd go with people/being-mover. "People rider" well, lets just say it raised my wife's eyebrow a bit followed by "woo-baby"..  |
November 10, 2007 - 8:10am | Hope folks don't mind went through and fixed some minor spelling errors, some that may be left I wasn't sure if they were intentional or not. hehe - I said a similar thing to w00t in chat! I said: "people-rider sounds like something that rides people..."For one of those moving sidewalks I'd go with people/being-mover. "People rider" well, lets just say it raised my wife's eyebrow a bit followed by "woo-baby".. We have no problem with edits. In fact, if you get inspired to do something in these documents, don't be afraid to make suggestions and such. Expanding on ideas... or even suggesting completely different directions. The document system has a revision history that allows us to go back if someone does something that we don't like, so there's no danger to you just adding your opinions and suggestions. We're glad to have the help! 3. We wear sungoggles during the day. Not because the sun affects our
vision, but when you're cool like us the sun shines all the time. |
