Feedback for Shadow Shack's SDA Project

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JCab747
June 13, 2018 - 7:33pm
If you don't mind me jumping in, I thought I would start a forum thread for you for any feedback for your project.
Joe Cabadas
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JCab747
June 13, 2018 - 7:36pm
"Yan-Soon began his military career in the Truane's Star government, starting off as an enlisted soldier and eventually graduating from officer training school and recieving a small command.'

I do like this character and some of the alternative background you've posted so far. I have yet to use him, but he makes a very good enemy for characters in a long campaign.

Joe Cabadas

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Shadow Shack
June 16, 2018 - 9:06pm
Thanks, my entire campaign is hinged on this upstart. ;)

Ask away if you need anything.
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JCab747
June 18, 2018 - 9:21pm
"Yan-Soon began his military career in the Truane's Star government, starting off as an enlisted soldier and eventually graduating from officer training school and recieving a small command. 

"He served briefly under Lieutenant Colonel Louis V. Jameson, laying down the tactics for Jameson's final mission before the Colonel's retirement of 22 years service."

This makes me think that Yan-Soon was among the nameless Truane's Star officials that sold out the first Volturnus expedition to the Star Devil.

Nice!

Joe Cabadas

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Shadow Shack
June 20, 2018 - 10:34pm
JCab747 wrote:

This makes me think that Yan-Soon was among the nameless Truane's Star officials that sold out the first Volturnus expedition to the Star Devil.

Nice!


Interesting take.

Yan-Soon is definitely all about conquest, although his early years could have just as easily gone this route too.
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jedion357
June 21, 2018 - 3:42pm
Isnt Yan Soon a vrusk? And in the Volturnus Connection article was not the head of MINER a vrusk who faked his death and became the Star Devil? 

Interesting coincidence.
I might not be a dralasite, vrusk or yazirian but I do play one in Star Frontiers!

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Shadow Shack
June 22, 2018 - 2:21am
Yan-Soon Shea-Dow is a yaz, rumored to be a clan-cousin to Streel's Hilo Headow (who naturally denies the rumor outright).

You might be thinking of his right hand man Lord Q'orter-Mein (formerly Q'ortarmas), the cybernetically enhanced/resurrected vruskan fighter jockey.
I'm not overly fond of Zeb's Guide...nor do I have any qualms stating why. Tongue out

My SF website