I can't draw

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rattraveller
December 4, 2017 - 10:07pm
Like I said, I can't draw so I thought I would give this a try. Let me know what you think and if you want to see any more and what you think I should do with it. Constructive critizism is appreciated otherwise I may just ignore it. Some of the jokes may fall flat but I hope none are offensive. I should mention this is a 13 strip series and all have been completed. 

Disclaimer I do not own the rights to any trademarks from Star Frontiers or Lego or any other things that may appear or seem to appear and it was all used with out permission of the trademark owners.

Frankly if they didn't want us to use it why did they publish/make the stuff.
Sounds like a great job but where did you say we had to go?
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rattraveller
December 4, 2017 - 10:09pm
Strip 1
Sounds like a great job but where did you say we had to go?

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rattraveller
December 4, 2017 - 10:10pm
Strip 2
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Shadow Shack
December 5, 2017 - 7:31am
I dig a comic strip regardless of how it is rendered, like they once said at marvel "It's the STORY that the readers want more than anything." The trick is rendering the visual to match the story.

Speaking of which, here's a good book for anyone that can or can't draw:


How to Draw Comics the Marvel Way
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iggy
December 5, 2017 - 7:57am
Funny how human females count as their own race.Innocent
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jedion357
December 5, 2017 - 1:35pm
iggy wrote:
Funny how human females count as their own race.Innocent

After having lived with one for 14 yrs ive come to the conclusion that they are a foreign species entirely. 
I might not be a dralasite, vrusk or yazirian but I do play one in Star Frontiers!

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rattraveller
December 5, 2017 - 8:35pm
Based the human female part on the drawings in the rulebooks. When the party containing one of every race is shown there is usually a human male and a human female.
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rattraveller
December 5, 2017 - 8:37pm
Oh should I throw the rest of them up here in one shot or wait between each one?
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Shadow Shack
December 6, 2017 - 8:07am
More. I won't complain. ;)
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rattraveller
December 6, 2017 - 7:44pm
Strip 3
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rattraveller
December 6, 2017 - 7:47pm
Strip 4
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TerlObar
December 8, 2017 - 1:35pm
Loving it.  I'd say just put them out as you have them done.

<Puts on editor hat>
In the third panel of the last image, did you mean desperate, not disparate?
<takes hat off>Smile
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rattraveller
December 8, 2017 - 4:13pm
I probably meant desperate but has Daub said, He said Dis.

Oh the strip is done just putting them up every couple days. It is only 13 panels.
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rattraveller
December 8, 2017 - 4:14pm
Strip 5
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rattraveller
December 8, 2017 - 4:15pm
Strip 6
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Shadow Shack
December 8, 2017 - 6:38pm
Stormtroopers as GTF. Cool. Cool
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rattraveller
December 10, 2017 - 5:58pm
Strip 7
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rattraveller
December 10, 2017 - 6:00pm
Strip 8
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rattraveller
December 13, 2017 - 6:29am
Strip 9
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rattraveller
December 13, 2017 - 6:35am
Strip 10
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Shadow Shack
December 13, 2017 - 8:53am
Strips 7-9 (along with all the priors) aren't showing up.
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rattraveller
December 13, 2017 - 2:28pm
I have this problem with the forums every once and a while. Usually clears up in a day or two.

This is also happening on some of the other forums like the picturs I posted in New Game.
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TerlObar
December 13, 2017 - 5:00pm
Actually, are you uploading them or hosting them somewhere else and then linking to them.  When Bill set up the site, he wanted people to do the latter and so put pretty strict limits on how much disk space a user could use in uploads.  You might be running into an issue with that.  If you are, I can raise your limit.
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rattraveller
December 14, 2017 - 4:13am
Did not know that know there was a limit. To finish this I will probably need a limit raise.
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TerlObar
December 14, 2017 - 3:17pm
Your limit has been raised.
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